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scarred4life
10-22-2004, 10:17 PM
I wrote this in school one day because my teacher wouldn't let me draw. I would type it all but its three pages long. Here's the interesting part.

Stephanie was walking past the basement when she heard screams. She went down and found the floor covered in fresh blood. In the corner was Amanda with her body torn open and her intestines was pulled out and stretched to a door on the other side of the room like a bloody rope "Oh no!" she then thought of going in but instead ran out of the mansion staight towards the gate out of there. She was almost there when she fell thruogh a hole in the ground and fell thirty feet down to a bottom of sharp stakes.

PS

The story is about a group of ghost hunters and investigators who enter a mansion owned by a mad doctor that killed 100 ppl and ate their hearts.

boogeyman87
10-22-2004, 10:20 PM
Originally posted by scarred4life
I wrote this in school one day because my teacher wouldn't let me draw. I would type it all but its three pages long. Here's the interesting part.

Stephanie was walking past the basement when she heard screams. She went down and found the floor covered in fresh blood. In the corner was Amanda with her body torn open and her intestines was pulled out and stretched to a door on the other side of the room like a bloody rope "Oh no!" she then thought of going in but instead ran out of the mansion staight towards the gate out of there. She was almost there when she fell thruogh a hole in the ground and fell thirty feet down to a bottom of sharp stakes.

PS

The story is about a group of ghost hunters and investigators who enter a mansion owned by a mad doctor that killed 100 ppl and ate their hearts.

You should post the entire thing.Its different and nice to read things that dont have to do with Halloween 9 sometimes.:rolleyes:

scarred4life
10-22-2004, 10:24 PM
Yeah i guess but still, three pages long and more than a thousand words? thats gonna be long

boogeyman87
10-22-2004, 10:32 PM
Originally posted by scarred4life
Yeah i guess but still, three pages long and more than a thousand words? thats gonna be long

Check out my storys so far(shameless plug:) ) its long sometimes to type it , but if your a good typer it will only really take you a half an hour really. Or just type a bit at a time , save it then copy and paste it into the thread if you didnt know. :)