Halloween:The Reckoning

[torturedsoul]

here's a script i wrote for all those people out there who may be interested. any and all feedback is welcomed. enjoy!:D

[torturedsoul]

again if anybody wants to check it out feel free to do so. and whatever feedback or ideas oyu may have feel free to relay them to me. thanks.

[torturedsoul]

i also have a teaser to the script if anyone wants to check it out too. nothing fancy at all. just something put together. but i'm trying to put together at least a 30-60 second long live action teaser trailer for it too.

[torturedsoul]

to all those who have downloaded the script so far thanks. and please remember to shoot me over some feedback on here guys. happy reading to all.

[torturedsoul]

well alrighty then. guess no one has feedback or comments yet. hopefully they're reading it and not burning it in effigy. ha!

[Creepingmouth]

Originally posted by torturedsoul
well alrighty then. guess no one has feedback or comments yet. hopefully they're reading it and not burning it in effigy. ha!


I printed it and used it to balance my chair :)

[torturedsoul]

NICE! least it was good for something. almost 100 pages for a chair balancing device. i need to make a patent for it.

[MichaelMyers101]

torturedsoul- I think you should write a quick synopsis, because unfortunately most people don't have the time to read an entire script! Just a suggestion.

[torturedsoul]

ok, thanks for the suggestion. but u can always download it if u want? but if not, cool. there are 2 endings to my story though. so if u want i can pm you the details. thanks.

[Creepingmouth]

Originally posted by torturedsoul
NICE! least it was good for something. almost 100 pages for a chair balancing device. i need to make a patent for it.


eh eh I was kiddin and I'm glad you took it in the right way,I don't like losers with no sense of humor.

Anyway I read your whole script.Can I post my thoughts here or should I better pm you?

[torturedsoul]

no prob man. i can appreciate good sarcasm. send me a pm. did u read both versions of the script with the different endings?

[Creepingmouth]

Originally posted by torturedsoul
did u read both versions of the script with the different endings?

Yes

[torturedsoul]

cool. so i guess just pm me with your feedback. thanks!

[Thrillogy]

thats one hell of an awesome script bro. keep up the execellent work !

[torturedsoul]

thanks a lot. i appreciate it. now it's time to write something on a more dramatic tone.

[torturedsoul]

i would just like to say thank you to all those i have personally spoke with and who have posted their feedback after reading my script. i can't thank you guys enough for the kind words and very positive comments. if anybody who's reading this hasn't read both versions of my script, feel free to do so and get back with me. and to those who have and would like to stay in touch with me as i continue writing other scripts, you can leave your contact info in a pm to me. a million thanks once again and keep loving the horror genre.

[FranchiseHatesMe]

You should make it so you can post it into the board Soul. So that way people with shity comps (LIKE ME) can read it. Even though i belive i already did its a bomb ass script.

[torturedsoul]

i had the link to it posted in the thread. i tried the copy and paste route as well but i decided against it because it just didn't look well that way. and i wanted it to flow really well when people read it. yes i remember sending it to you and i appreciate the compliment. i only wish i had more time to dedicate to helping write another member's anthology script from here. but i am so busy trying to write 3 other scripts at this time. oh yeah, plus i have a job and a life away from writing, haha. but if i continue to improve my writing craft i would love to write as a full time job. thanks again for the advice and the kind words on my script. hearing true fans such as yourself enjoying reading it pumps me up and keeps me typing away well into the late night hours.

[Evil Never Dies]

That was good. Well done. The start of it was really good and the dialoge wasn't as chessey as other fan scripts.

You did a good job!

[torturedsoul]

thanks, evil. i appreciate the compliments on the script. i'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. i'm busy writing 3 other scripts as of now. 1 drama, 1 action with well known characters, 1 script that i hope will be a kick azz story that i am not sure i would label as horror only. maybe horror with a ton of depth. needless to say it's going to be about 120-150 pages long, yikes! if you guys think i should post my other scripts which aren't halloween related on here let me know. or give me your emails in private and i'd be glad to share them with you. thanks again and let's hope halloween 9 is awesome and worth the wait!

[torturedsoul]

ok everyone i fixed my script to where it looks more professional, ha! i basically just rearranged the margins to where they're supposed to be. when i wrote it i just got the story down i wanted to tell. i was wanting to have it out by halloween which i did. now i went back and fixed it. that was a looong process to do. plus the right margins made it jump from 96 pages to 119, acck! but anyway, i shall digress. i'm currently working on numerous other scripts, only one of which is for the horror genre. if anybody who liked my halloween script would like to read my other works once they're done just drop me a line in here or send me your email info through a private message. and thanks again to everyone who read my script and gave me the great feedback on it.

[big mike]

good very good