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Ska
10-09-2004, 08:32 AM
Alright...I've been thinking about this storyline for this suspense/horror story.It would revolve around a modern day Nazi praying on people of different "race,religion",you guys know the deal. He would murder them using ways the nazis used in WWII. What do you guys think? Im not rascist or anything,I just think that its scary. But yeah,what do you think?
Beau
10-09-2004, 10:58 AM
I think it's pretty cool but needs a little bit more work.
Thrillogy
10-09-2004, 04:35 PM
pretty creative idea so far. like beau says needs some work but could turn out pretty kick ass ;) keep us updated
Ska
10-09-2004, 06:04 PM
Yeah..i know..im trying to make it a more complete storyline,I just need a little time...
Thrillogy
10-09-2004, 08:46 PM
could be a great storyline!
Ska
10-10-2004, 07:09 AM
I was just thinking,maybe the Nazi guy captures a guy,and has him witness all the murders,he reads from the "Mein Kampf" to him...stuff like that,he trys to convert the man....
Dusk
10-10-2004, 04:14 PM
don't forget to kill a few polish folks (I'm polish). You could have your character stick their heads into a gas oven. Shit, it'll be like old times.
Ska
10-10-2004, 05:44 PM
nahhhh,unless the Pole is"unpure" to the nazi character,he wouldn't kill him/her. I was thinking of a scene earlier when the nazi carves a swastika into the main characters forehead...Manson style....because the man refuses to believe in what the nazi believes,but the nazi won't kill him because he wants him to convert....